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Hello Kayla, I think your slide was a great thought and the colours were not to full on. I also liked how you proved yourself wrong when you did just dance. I thought you could make the front slide a bit more interesting but overall I LOVED IT!!!
Hi, Kayla I think that you could make the front slide more interesting because all of the other slides are bright and colourful. I really like the just dance slide because I love just dance. Charlotte.M
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Hello Kayla, I think your slide was a great thought and the colours were not to full on. I also liked how you proved yourself wrong when you did just dance. I thought you could make the front slide a bit more interesting but overall I LOVED IT!!!
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ReplyDeleteHi, Kayla I think that you could make the front slide more interesting because all of the other slides are bright and colourful. I really like the just dance slide because I love just dance. Charlotte.M
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