Thursday 13 June 2019

Annihilation

3 comments:

  1. Hi Kayla I really enjoyed reading your writing about the annihilation game. Some of your adjectives were really good and it was really engaging. I also liked how you included some speech. In one of the sentences you had about three commas - maybe next time add a full stop in there instead. Awesome writing Kayla!
    From Kya

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  3. Hi kayla
    Your writing was amazing straight away it hooked me in i couldn't stop reading! I liked how you used some powerful words and your punctuation was spot on. Just remember not to repeat a sentence to often. I love inhalation its so fun, is it your favorite game? Keep up the phenomenal work.
    Thanks Ruby

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